Most writers
believe they are good writers. Most writers are good story tellers. I believe
that I am a good writer and for a long time, I felt that my writing didn’t need
much editing. After all, I’d been writing for years. I was wrong.
I am a good
writer, but in the writing and telling of our own work, we are prone to
mistakes. Words pour out of me almost like someone is telling me a story. When
the words are flowing, I let them because to edit in the moment interrupts the
flow. However, words that are speaking through me are like the under painting
on a canvas. It’s the background that will need many layers before the project
is complete. Each time I reread the piece, I touch up a part here, fix a word
there. After awhile, my brain becomes a bit mushy and my eyes just slide over
the words. I’ve read this over and over. There can’t be any more mistakes.
But often
there are. Like a couple weeks ago when I wrote the word “ascetic” when it
should have been “aesthetic.” Two very different meanings with ascetic meaning
rigid self discipline (and totally wrong for what I was writing) and aesthetic
meaning visually pleasing. In the interview, my mind heard the word ascetic and
did not even realize it was the wrong word. In this case, the proofreader didn’t
catch it and when the article came out in the paper, the interviewee called me
on my mistake. Oops, how embarrassing; sorry.
I’ve
researched various avenues for publishing and they all offer extra “services”
like editing. (I used quotation marks because, in my sarcastic mind, the
company is just looking for more money.) I refused to pay to have someone edit
my work. I’m a good writer! I don’t need someone to look for mistakes that I
knew I had taken care of. Wrong! I DO need someone to edit and proofread.
I hear this
from others, too, who insist they are good writers. They are insulted when
their work is edited. However, we all make mistakes. Sometimes it jumps off the
page at the reader and other times it’s subtle. You want your writing to be
understood, but when the reader has to reread a sentence a couple times to try
to figure out what is being said, then that’s a red flag. The writer knows
exactly what is being said, but if the reader doesn’t… and again, that’s why it’s
helpful to have someone else proofread for you.
I’m not
stressing this point just because I am now an official editor. I’m saying this
because we all need help. I am getting better all the time, but I know that I
cannot be the sole editor and proofreader of my own work. I need someone else
to go over the writing when my mind is no longer seeing anything wrong. Oh, most
of the time I’ve done the job well, but to have that surety, to know that what
goes out to the public is excellent writing will help build my reputation as a
writer and I do want to make a living from my art.
And that’s
the whole point. I want people to like my writing. I want to sell my books and
if people are seeing mistakes or they can’t understand what I was saying
because my sentences are too long and confusing, then they won’t buy the next
book. More than once I’ve heard someone say, “He told a good story, but I found
the grammar and spelling errors distracting. I would not buy his book” or “Her
sentences are too long and I couldn’t follow her line of thought” or “The
paragraphs were so long that it was difficult to read.”
I know it’s
hard to have someone read your work before it is published. You want the reader
to be surprised and pleased by your work. You want them to be excited by your
writing. You don’t want to give it all away before it’s printed as a beautiful-looking
book. But please, if you want to sell that book, make every effort to be sure that
it is written well!
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